Try...Try....TRY AGAIN!

putting it bluntly... I was annoyed at the first attempt and couldn't stop thinking about it...so tried again!!! Here we are now... at another attempt I think this one is better than the first... coz the first just made me wanted to cry it was so appauling.... theres clearly room for improvement ... I definately know that...but I think something like this COULD work...COULD.....possibly tweak the footage earlier... slightly before the jump...but hey...we'll see how it goes :p